But it is a little rough. you need to smooth it out a bit.
A 7 is a little harsh isn't it? The only reason this pic looks rough is because I had to compress it to JPEG in order for me to post it on here. Next time you leave feedback, instead of just saying it looks a little rough, you should probably offer some advice on what you think would make it better. Thanks for looking though.
not as good as your other one.
But good, nonetheless.
The only thing I don't like is the positioning of her skirt's a little weird and her face is a little long.
thanks, yeah, i know -_-
Although the head's a little big then the body seems to get smaller and smaller.
I like the detail but...
...her stance is very statuesque, like she's got a cramp in her neck or something.
For this, you get a 7
i dont know if i can agree, i wanted her to have an arrogant , proud attitude, and i based the stance on photographs, the only stuff that really bugged me was the left hand.
Degraded to being stuck in a box.
I wish I had a Tom in a box :P
Feel free to use my design and make your own if you want. Tom belongs to everyone!
You're shading is excellent my friend.
And you shouldn't ask for people to look at your work. If you're good enough your time will come.
Thanks alot and your right about that i going to wait it out next time.
It's a little sloppy. You need to work harder on your drawings. Don't just think of something scribble it on and then post it. Take your time. If it takes you three days, it takes you three days. If it takes you a month, it takes you a month. Take pride in your work.
Although I love a good old fashioned sword fight.
Make a closer version next time.
Will do. I've got some sketches I can build on; I'll try and get a polished version up later.
There's a no sketch rule.
Yes, I realize this But its not a sketch other whys it would have been extreamely crude and i wouldn't have bothered to textureise the whole things, I would have left it scribbly.
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